Can you guys give me your thought on this rhyme

theabbot 7 · 20-11-2010, 07:52 PM

protoplasm, the phrenology of diuretics of my hippocampi within the mind of my brain matter/the magnetical musings of a master/Calculate the mathematical measurements of Allah's world with an prism an abacus/the ingenious wisdom within that of my lyricism ;which in turn give fuel to my writings/reminisce of lessons from the verbatim of King Solomon/Palaeolithic objects of that period embellished within an leather covered papyrus on the pop-up/titular existentialist a remarkable lyricist whose gifted/with 3rd eye visions of Genesis/ transcending the remnants of Assyrian descendants......

i11u5iv3 · 21-11-2010, 01:51 AM

im sure its AMAZING!! ... but i dont have a dictionary handy. also sounds a little racist to me.

i11u5iv3 · 21-11-2010, 01:52 AM

Short fuse or short tempers
We refuse to lose or remember
Fireworks exploding in novemer
Night sky lit sky light sky
Blossoms with amber of ember ...

theabbot 7 · 21-11-2010, 04:39 PM

your really showing you level of understanding

your on a conscious website davidicke.com

and your telling me you dont understand that probably why your post in this forum are primary in the forum talent because you understanding of the topics which are discussed here are minuscule

i11u5iv3 · 21-11-2010, 10:11 PM

no man. dont call me stupid. you dont have to use a thesaurus to pretend your smart.

theabbot 7 · 22-11-2010, 11:06 PM

you dont even know why rappers use a thesaurus btw all youre post where you choose to spam within my thread with your "raps" has been reported

you say you dont have to use a thesaurus first off

google Ras Kass
LL Cool J

LL Cool J has admitted to using a thesaurus first off i dont use a thesaurus, i make sure what im saying i can breakdown if someone ask me.

you getting on here and and you saying this that and the other and you making yourself look foolish

do you know what a complex rhyme is?
do you know what a multi-syllable rhyme is?
do you know what a internal rhyme is?

because i look at your rhymes and its lacking, you keeping this "i use this or you dont have to use big words to sound smart"

i'll put my money on my favorite rapper canibus and you put money on yours and i'll guarantee canibus will eat you favorite mc alive

i dont write for emos
i dont write for street-corner hustlers
i dont write for gangbangers

i write rhymes for the intelligent listener ears

i ask you several question and you cant answer, and your response is always childish, you call yourself dissing me and got embarrass

you saying my rhyme is racist but couldnt tell me how that statement right there shows and proves you and me are two different people im not here on david icke to spam people threads like you do or post non-sensible threads, which you did and general chat and get embarrass

can you tell me the origins of the yin and the yang?
can you tell me what was Africa before it was known as Africa?
what was Europe called before it was known as Europe?

you cant answer none of these question, the difference between me and you are:

the fact that i study read and understand and philosophize

how are youre rhymes exercise the chakra of pure consciousness?

you dont want me to call you stupid, but you call yourself insulting my rhymes which are complex and lace with reference which you can find on david icke site.

whose the fool the one who has information within their grasp and chooses not to read the various thread or one who ignores it?

what category do YOU fall under?

i think you know

i rest my case

passing · 29-11-2010, 07:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by theabbot 7

protoplasm, the phrenology of diuretics of my hippocampi within the mind of my brain matter/the magnetical musings of a master/Calculate the mathematical measurements of Allah's world with an prism an abacus/the ingenious wisdom within that of my lyricism ;which in turn give fuel to my writings/reminisce of lessons from the verbatim of King Solomon/Palaeolithic objects of that period embellished within an leather covered papyrus on the pop-up/titular existentialist a remarkable lyricist whose gifted/with 3rd eye visions of Genesis/ transcending the remnants of Assyrian descendants......

Isn't a diuretic something that makes you piss more than you've drunk?

ragnarok · 29-11-2010, 07:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by theabbot 7

protoplasm, the phrenology of diuretics of my hippocampi within the mind of my brain matter/the magnetical musings of a master/Calculate the mathematical measurements of Allah's world with an prism an abacus/the ingenious wisdom within that of my lyricism ;which in turn give fuel to my writings/reminisce of lessons from the verbatim of King Solomon/Palaeolithic objects of that period embellished within an leather covered papyrus on the pop-up/titular existentialist a remarkable lyricist whose gifted/with 3rd eye visions of Genesis/ transcending the remnants of Assyrian descendants......

Yes. It doesn't rhyme.

ps. I'm only messing with ya. Keep up the good work.

cess · 29-11-2010, 07:05 PM

Quick, somebody throw down a piece of cardboard. We'll have a breakdance competition and settle this once and for all.

passing · 29-11-2010, 07:07 PM

I like the last line!

mara · 29-11-2010, 07:12 PM

???

ragnarok · 29-11-2010, 07:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by passing

I like the last line!

Hey, I just realised - that one rhymes!

My deepest apologies, OP.

20-11-2010, 07:52 PM	#1
theabbot 7 Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 1,613	Can you guys give me your thought on this rhyme protoplasm, the phrenology of diuretics of my hippocampi within the mind of my brain matter/the magnetical musings of a master/Calculate the mathematical measurements of Allah's world with an prism an abacus/the ingenious wisdom within that of my lyricism ;which in turn give fuel to my writings/reminisce of lessons from the verbatim of King Solomon/Palaeolithic objects of that period embellished within an leather covered papyrus on the pop-up/titular existentialist a remarkable lyricist whose gifted/with 3rd eye visions of Genesis/ transcending the remnants of Assyrian descendants......

29-11-2010, 07:05 PM	#9
cess Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 1,087	Quick, somebody throw down a piece of cardboard. We'll have a breakdance competition and settle this once and for all. __________________ Yes, I'm a local and yes, I will give you directions.

21-11-2010, 01:51 AM	#2
i11u5iv3 Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 200	im sure its AMAZING!! ... but i dont have a dictionary handy. also sounds a little racist to me.

21-11-2010, 01:52 AM	#3
i11u5iv3 Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 200	Short fuse or short tempers We refuse to lose or remember Fireworks exploding in novemer Night sky lit sky light sky Blossoms with amber of ember ...

21-11-2010, 04:39 PM	#4
theabbot 7 Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 1,613	your really showing you level of understanding your on a conscious website davidicke.com and your telling me you dont understand that probably why your post in this forum are primary in the forum talent because you understanding of the topics which are discussed here are minuscule

21-11-2010, 10:11 PM	#5
i11u5iv3 Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 200	no man. dont call me stupid. you dont have to use a thesaurus to pretend your smart.

22-11-2010, 11:06 PM	#6
theabbot 7 Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 1,613	you dont even know why rappers use a thesaurus btw all youre post where you choose to spam within my thread with your "raps" has been reported you say you dont have to use a thesaurus first off google Ras Kass LL Cool J LL Cool J has admitted to using a thesaurus first off i dont use a thesaurus, i make sure what im saying i can breakdown if someone ask me. you getting on here and and you saying this that and the other and you making yourself look foolish do you know what a complex rhyme is? do you know what a multi-syllable rhyme is? do you know what a internal rhyme is? because i look at your rhymes and its lacking, you keeping this "i use this or you dont have to use big words to sound smart" i'll put my money on my favorite rapper canibus and you put money on yours and i'll guarantee canibus will eat you favorite mc alive i dont write for emos i dont write for street-corner hustlers i dont write for gangbangers i write rhymes for the intelligent listener ears i ask you several question and you cant answer, and your response is always childish, you call yourself dissing me and got embarrass you saying my rhyme is racist but couldnt tell me how that statement right there shows and proves you and me are two different people im not here on david icke to spam people threads like you do or post non-sensible threads, which you did and general chat and get embarrass can you tell me the origins of the yin and the yang? can you tell me what was Africa before it was known as Africa? what was Europe called before it was known as Europe? you cant answer none of these question, the difference between me and you are: the fact that i study read and understand and philosophize how are youre rhymes exercise the chakra of pure consciousness? you dont want me to call you stupid, but you call yourself insulting my rhymes which are complex and lace with reference which you can find on david icke site. whose the fool the one who has information within their grasp and chooses not to read the various thread or one who ignores it? what category do YOU fall under? i think you know i rest my case

29-11-2010, 07:07 PM	#10
passing Inactive Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: UK Posts: 5,659	I like the last line!

29-11-2010, 07:12 PM	#11
mara Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 2,136	???