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Follow the Fools (demo) A look into how we are antagonized by the 'Powers That Be' during our lives. |
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the verse singing is a bit monotonal and theres so much vocal effect you cant tell what its about.
it has really great potential as a composition. the rest seems just fine. if making a catchy verse melody is eluding you try adding some attitude or drama to the current one, sort of ham it up.
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see the world as walking in spirit in harmony and let everything else go Last edited by verndewd; 20-05-2010 at 07:39 AM. |
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Cheers - tis only a demo... i'm not brill at singing so the auto-tune kind of warps the vocal a bit
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too bad its a cool sound as far as the instrumentation goes. maybe find a singer?
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