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xdnax
16-09-2007, 12:34 AM
this was about a little astral projection meet up i had with someone.....but i think it is also a good portrayal of the bigger picture, if you associate oneness with my "dream woman"......hope you enjoy.

"DREAM WOMAN"

On the horizon the sun retreats,
the clear blue ocean carresses my feet,
mixing with the whitest of sands beneath,
the dreamiest paradise awakes my sleep//

off in the distance is where she stands,
patiently awaiting our union of hands,
i sense no frustration - she understands,
the real intentions of fairytale plans//

without conditions - this love is the purest,
with all my conviction i yearn to explore it,
i have no resistance i cannot ignore this,
i have no restrictions - within me is ALL this//

the vision we projected - i base my trust on,
so i retrace my steps to the beach which we stood on,
the infinite heaven which i long to summon,
where i met my goddess - my real dream woman// x


NOTE: let me re-itterate my desire for a part of this forum dedicated to us members' art, music, and writings!!!

peace

lifeofbrian
16-09-2007, 12:39 AM
Very nice. :)

limelady
16-09-2007, 12:49 AM
Hi xdnax, nice poem!


NOTE: let me re-itterate my desire for a part of this forum dedicated to us members' art, music, and writings!!!

We do have a place. Perhaps you haven't scrolled down far enough? :D

Forum Talent (http://www.davidicke.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?f=38)

or even

Forum Projects / Meetings / Members "stuff"
(http://www.davidicke.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?f=39)

LL

xdnax
16-09-2007, 12:58 AM
Hi xdnax, nice poem!




We do have a place. Perhaps you haven't scrolled down far enough? :D

Forum Talent (http://www.davidicke.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?f=38)

or even

Forum Projects / Meetings / Members "stuff"
(http://www.davidicke.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?f=39)

LL

sorry! thats just me being a lazy bastard and only really checking out the general forum. lmao

sorry, and thank you ever so much :) xx

peace

mountain
16-09-2007, 02:43 AM
Very lovely! true from th heart! that woman was me, by the way....

xdnax
16-09-2007, 03:40 AM
Very lovely! true from th heart! that woman was me, by the way....

confused as to the meaning behind "that woman was me".....but yeah, thanks for the "very lovely" bit :)

peace xx

adimon
16-09-2007, 04:16 AM
I hope that you meet her, if you haven't already. :cool: