New Song By Me "eternal Love"

[xdnax]

http://youtube.com/watch?v=Ng9dNCXAqGU

:)

VERSE 1

Time flies,i realise its endless,
my love grows as if its relentless,
if i rationalise 2most it seems senseless,
&its of the truest essense so it stands defenceless
...cos it needs no defending, it needs no pretending,
the kind im recomending, real and never ending,
the message im sending from every pore of my body,
times change,what remains,u can be sure that u'v got me,
undescribable emotions means half isnt told,
of what i behold from my heart to my soul,
when it starts to unfold i jst cant give n go,
so i embark on this roadfrom the start to the fold,
walk my own path,disregard what is 'known',
planted my own seeds and the garden will grow,
&whats startin to show is the root of the matter,
my eternal love, from the here to the after.
(and this is the 1 and only chapter)

CHORUS

E-T-E-R-N-A-L-L-O-V-E

LOVE IS THE TRUTH 4 ETERNITY


VERSE 2

The way i c the world 2 b isnt discerning me,
cos compassionate love is the truth for eternity,
together on this journey we become ppl we learn to be,
ignoring the wonders of united diversity,
with or without my words i reach-out2ur soul,
when u question urself-r those doubts of ur own?
or what u percieve of what to believe?
are we just reflectin what other people want us2be?
are we slaves2the mask? 2the days that have past?
in a maze with no map, livin dazed in a trap,
confused by'rules'-&the way we react?
ltake whats most convenient and blame it on that,
we take individuals-condemn&we redicule,
basing our views from the news in our living rooms,
&so hypocritical-why do we miss the truth?
u want'true freedom'but ur view's contradicting u,
addicted2norms-restrictive2ALL,
u can stick2its forms-but i kick in the walls,
cos how i see the world2be isnt discerning me,
cos compassionate love is the truth for eternity.
(and this what ya need to learn ta see)

VERSE 3

this - isnt -
love by any ordinary measures
cos this love is not restricted by imaginary pressures
no1 cud ruin it 4 me, i dont care bout other fellaz
cos the unity of "we", when our minds r merged 2gether
knows no jelousy, flows 4ever free
those that envy we, are those that never see
it dont take "better be"s to prove love
n we'll 4ever be in true love
because i love ur soul, there4 i love u whole
dont need u 4my own, i need u just 2 know
there might b ppl 2 the side, but there's no1 above you
and i truly love them just like i truly love you
(and that's the only thing thats ever really stood true)

[icke_is_right]

I'm now listening to 'Sanity' for the 4th time in a row and not normally into this type of music! This is my favourite track and it really rocks. I hope music like this could spread the word on the evil that surrounds us,,,, to a wider audience. I also strongly suspect it's (and the others) written from the heart. I hope more people listen to your music.

It's pretty obvious that some of the big names in music are preaching one thing whilst doing another, ie the ones who move their money to tax havens whilst telling us to give to the poor. Coming to this site reminds me that there are a whole load of good people around still.


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[icke_is_right]

Sorry, I forgot to comment on the main song, I got carried away with all the other stuff. I think the phrasing on this is great. Another great song and it's hard to get the vocals right on tracks like this. Obviously this is what you're made for.

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[xdnax]

thank yooooooou very very much mate :)