a poem

[nuit]

You think you know what's happening:
Oh, really? What is happening?
Is it just to you? Or everybody? Or just a few?
And what is the what in what's happening?
Is it sensible? Emotable? Real? Magical?
Are you damned or doomed when you exit the womb?
And who gets the gold when you go in the tomb?
And who gets the girl when the dragon drops down?
And why do villains rule all the towns?
Or is Life perfectly normal and the people just stupid?
Money talks and bullshit walks, or so they say:
Who is they? The ones who listen to the money?
And where does the bullshit walk to?
How does an invertebrate substance walk?
Are you easily confused?
Perplexed? Puzzled? Is the Darkness
Caused by too much Light in your eyes?
Who is covering up?
Why the Power Structure keeps you in the Dark!
IT WANTS YOUR MONEY!
IT WANTS POWER OVER YOU SO...
IT CAN TAKE ALL OF YOUR MONEY!
So it tells you a lot of lies: Politicians are your friends!
Lawyers have your best interests at heart!
Do what you're told and "DON'T ROCK THE BOAT!"
Conform! Buy over your head! Stay in debt!
Obey all laws; they are designed to protect you
from yourself!
And the lawyers and politicians: Our leaders!
Are you as confused as this Poet?
This is probably not possible!
This Poet is confused like a Mother fucker!
So don't feel bad, or alone, or helpless...
That is what they want you to feel...
So you will conform! Obey! Do your patriotic duty!
Be square and obey the Law of the Pack:
DEMOCRACY = INSTITUTIONALIZED MOB RULE
SO CUT THRU THE BULLSHIT:
DISSOLVE THE CONFUSION & MYSTIFICATION
See it for what it is and tell it like it is!
So let it be written, so let it be done!

[h1s_l0rdsh1p]

That was nice.
I like the last two lines. Lines usually used by Royalty.
I also like the "use your senses" feeling that went along with it, like with the question "How does an invertebrate substance walk?".

[gravityhero23]

excellent flow stylee

I emotively bounced along to the rhythm:

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[hagbard_celine]

Good poem, Nuit.:)

[dondaz]

Hey I like your poem. Covers a wide area and is interesting. Good stuff.

[lookfar]

Yeah I'd like to know who wrote it as it's not clear from the post. Can you tell us please nuit?:)

[soglad]

Is this another plagairism attempt?

[lizzy]

SO CUT THRU THE BULLSHIT:
DISSOLVE THE CONFUSION & MYSTIFICATION
---------------
Is'nt Crowley is all about MYSTIFICATION.

AND this cut and paste is BULLSHIT

[kennethb]

i thought nuit wrote it